Original Double Page SpreadCurrent, Revised Double Page SpreadAs you can see, I kept the revisions to my double page spread very minimal. The only significant change made was on the first page (page 17), in which I edited the article to make it easier to read by changing the font/layout of the text, which I did based on feedback from my teacher. This also removed a lot of the empty space on the page, which my teacher also advised me to do. No changes were made on page 2 (page 18) as I was pleased with how it looked, and received positive feedback on it from my teacher. The revised table of contents is also what I submitted as my finalized version, as are the revised table of contents and revised magazine cover.
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